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2006-12-02 8:11 am

Thank you for your kind consent for us to visit your Home at 3:30 pm on XX Dec 2006. I am pleased to confirm that a staff of about 15 will attend this visit.

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有大約15位員工會到院舍參觀

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我想問一問我以上o既寫法係唔係好差呢? 係咪有好多地方係錯呢?

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Rebecca

2006-12-02 9:22 am

It's our great honor to be invited to your home on XX December at 3:30p.m. 15 of our staff (or 15 of us) will be there and we are looking forward to it. Thanks again!

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用戶21483

2006-12-02 8:25 am

consent + to.........

a staff of about 15???? 一個(有關)15的員工還是一個員工15?15 個員工去人家裡? 去別人家裡便不用那麼 formal 說 attend this visit 了.

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vegitou

2006-12-02 8:16 am

Thank you for your kind consent to our visit to your home on xx Dec 2006 at 3:30 p.m. I also have the pleasure to inform you that there will be altogether 15 staff members attending in this visit.

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