請幫改文. qq

Yesterday, I got up at 7 o`clock. [Then,] I washed my face and [rinsed my mouth]. [After] having my breakfast, I put on my school uniform and shoes. I [left] home at 8 o`clock. [Walking for a while], I got to bus stop and waited for school bus. [Five] minutes later, the bus arrived at the bus stop and I got on the bus. [Fifteen] minutes later. The bus got to the school and I got [off] the bus. As soon as I arrived at the classroom, the school alarm [started] to ring. [And] then I [started] to study.

Don't use too many commas... It's not Chinese composition.

Yesterday, I got up at 7am then washed my face and neck. After breakfast I put on my school uniform and shoes. I left the house at 8am and went to the bus stop. After 5 minutes wait the bus arrived. I rode the bus to school, the journey was fifteen minutes long. I went to my classroom and as I arrived the bell rang and I started to study.

試吓la.我同你删除咗d不需要的字眼令句子順d,同埋如果你想用 ( O'clock 做時間,應該加 IN THE MORNING在後面即是 7 o'clock in the morning或者用 7am)日因為o'clock是不代表早上和夜晚的.

希望幫到你!

Yesterday I up at 7,then cleaned myself ,
After my breakfast I wear my school uniform and shoes ,
I out of home at 8,I stay in bus stop to waited school bus about 5 mins the bus
arrived.The bus got to school in 15mins then I got out the bus.
I got in the classroom the bell was ringing and I start to study.