我想問下一個英文讀后感既開頭點寫呀?10分

I have read a story book about ghost,this book is talking about ghost and human.
- Since the action of reading has already completed, you should use the simple past tense for the verb read.
- Ghosts is a collective noun here and so you should use the plural form.
- The two sentences are disjoint. The first statement indicates that the story is about ghosts, but immediately the second statement contradicts that by saying that the story is about ghosts and humans. So, which is which?
- Unless you need to talk about the human species, it is more common to use the term "people" to refer to you and me :)
- Suggestion: I read a story about about ghosts and people.

I am not afraid when I was reading the book,because I have been read so much about ghost books before that,so ghost is just the things that create by human
- Being afraid happened in the past, and so you should use the past tese.
- I have been read -- present perfect, passive voice: Has someone been reading lots of ghost stories to you? I suppose that you want to say "I have read." To be consistent with the previous sentence, it would be better to use the past perfect continous tense (I had been reading).
- You read books, and you read about subjects. (I read ghost stories. I read about ghosts.)
- What does the that in before that refer to? I suppose you added this phrase due because of Chinese. Remember that Chinese verbs do not inflect and so you have to use more adverbs of time to clarify the time aspect of the verb. In English, you can skip the adverbs of time in many situations because the verb has already implied the sequence of events.
- You are expressing too many ideas in one sentence. Break them up to help the reader understand better.
- Suggestion: I was not afraid when reading the book. I had been reading so much about ghosts and I believe that ghosts are created by people's imagination.

so I am not scare when I was reading it. And I strongly recommend this book to you ,because it is very exciting.
- You just mentioned that you were not afraid, and so I doubt that you need to bring up the point again.
- The recommendation is very weak here because you talked so much about the book not scaring you, but then all of a sudden it had your recommendation. The transition is too abrupt. If you truly recommend a book, you should talk more about what you like about the book.

many people living in the same world, there are different skin, culture and history, but we can live together, so that i think we could live with ghosts too.
- You stated that ghosts were created by people in the second paragraph. Why would you think that now ghosts and people could live together?
- What does people of different skin colours, cultures, or histories living together have anything to do with our living together with ghosts?

human and ghosts are also live in the world, they have different foods,hobbies and so on. we also use a lot by the world, but the ghost and human don't need hurt anyone to survive, so we can live in peace with the ghost.
- To support your point, you should be making references from the book. It is difficult to convince most people that ghosts eat foot and have hobbies.
- Do you think that everyone sees ghosts everyday? If not, how are we supposed to "live in peace" with ghosts?

I would recommend that you focus more on what you learned from the book instead of coming up with generalization based on your own ideas. If you want to express your ideas, make sure that you quote from the book first and explain why it leads you to have your opinion.

Good luck.

I've read a ghost story called (XXX) and it was very interesting etc...

A1:U should start by writing "I think the book is"......
A2: U should write about how u feel after reading the book, the story, like/ dislike the book, if u were the writer, what would u write , u dislike the character or not, would u rename the character, would u add another character and things like that...

i (like OR don't like) this story ,
because i think this story....
之後寫落去...

i think this story..........