✔ 最佳答案
"因為這裡除了可以到處參觀外,亦會變成一個城市休閒的地 方"
呢句有少少問題,好似連中文都講唔過去,所以我幫你略為改動左少少。
Overview of The Kowloon Park
The Kowloon Park is one of the parks has long historical background in Hong Kong, it located at the centre of Tsim Sha Tsui in Kowloon side.
Both public bus services and MTR (Mass Transit Railway) services have routes which stop at The Kowloon Park. Because of its convenient location, it is a good place for everyone in the city who wanted to have a rest.
The Kowloon Park is suitable for diversity of age group as well as gender to visit, therefore, it is not a place that only for tourists, but also a “hot spot” of local sightseeing group.
Nevertheless, visitors can walk around in the whole park, but also can take a rest in the relaxed ambiance.
The following information is some reference of The Kowloon Park, please sit back, relax and enjoy it. Thank you very much.
E 個版本絕對唔係最好,基於時間關係,只根據閣下意思將之翻譯,如任何朋友能提供更好好的版本,小妹絕對冇問題。
希望對你有少少幫助啦!