請問文法是否對？多謝幫忙！

Please be noted that your leave application should be sent to (A) for approval before sent to (B). Then, (A) will reply you by email and c.c. to (C) for records.


In referring to the attached outstanding list, you should arrange T/T payment to us on this Friday. As we are in need of money, would you please arrange the said payment on time? / please arrange the said payment on time. Awaiting yr good news.

Pls find the below email/attachment for yr reference.

The address is attached. {single sentence}

Please find the address as attached.

Some comment from myself --> It seems a formal e-mail. I suggest you don't use the short form "yr", "Pls".

1) It is correct.

2) It is strange to tell your clients that you are in short of money. I suggest you ignore "As we are in need of money".
==> Refer to the attached outstanding list, you should arrange T/T payment to us on or before Friday. Would you please arrange the said payment on time. Awaiting your good news.

3) Please find the attachment for your reference.

3) The address is attached. / Please find the address as attached.

(1) Please note that your leave application should be sent to (A) for his approval before sending it to (B). Thereafter (A) will reply to you by email and a copy thereof will be sent to (C) for record.

(2) With reference to the attached outstanding list, you should arrange payment to us by T/T on or before this coming Friday. As we are in short of money, please arrange payment of the said sum on time. We look forward to receiving your prompt reply.

(3) Please find below the enclosed email / attachment for your reference.

(4) The address is attached herewith.