文法上, 有錯嗎?

在文法上基本沒錯, 但是句子的結構和意思便有問題了. 先用中文說一遍你所寫的意思讓你看看有沒有問題.

1. 我在大埔和一些朋友(我和一些朋友在大埔)和我們租了(租咗)單車.
有意思嗎? 以下是一個比較正確的說法, 若你想說你去大埔玩, 後來才租車, 便會是另一寫法了.
Correct one: Last Sunday, my friend and I were in Taipo where we rented some bicycles for cycling. 你既然說出去大埔這地點租單車, 你也應寫出在那一日去.

2. 怎可用將 lovely 和 warm 這兩個形容詞放在一起?
Correct one: It's a warm and lovely day!!

3. 你說你沿著路徑慢慢走去, 那你是不是在馬路行? along the path 是中式英文, 其實有時我們學識英文後, 便會知道一些中文是有問題的, 這句便是其中一例子. 有一個朋友問過, I walked along the stair. 而這句是錯的, 這句就像你那句一樣. 只沿著樓梯(旁邊)走而永遠都不可以上或落樓.

Correct one: We were cycling slowly ON the path.

4. 我們只是享受我們自己? 不是吧! 你們怎享受自己? 你要寫出你享受什麼才對.

Correct one: We enjoyed the activety so much and we had a sea food dinner at Sam Mun Tsai after the cycling .(三門仔, 吃海鮮不錯, 但那個英文譯文不知有否錯, 若你要跟足來用, 你便要查證了)

agree with gjhgdf

可能你意圖係幫人, 可惜錯得交關不得不負評. (1) 無需要寫那一日 (2) 並無規定話兩個形容詞一定要用 and 來連起 (3) walked along the stair 是沿著梯級而行, 只是沒說明方向, 不是沿著樓梯旁邊 (4) enjoy oneself 是普通不過的地道英語說法!!! 咁都未聽過!!??

我想用別的字會好d。
I was in Tai Po(我唔知係唔係真係有Taipo此地)with my friends and we rode bicycles.
第二句好好。
We went along the path slowly.
We were enjoying ourselves.

好似你講緊 d 中文英文
不如同你寫過

My friends and I rented bicycles for fun while we were in Taipo.
It was a warm and lovely day.
We cycling slowly along the cycling path.
We all enjoyed the pleasure time that day.

大致上沒問題, past tense 用得恰當!

解釋,唔好抄,其他人,唔好用我個答案

我是在Taipo 與一些朋友並且我們租用了自行車。這是一可愛的溫暖的天。我們慢慢地去沿道路。我們是正義的開心。

2006-11-23 16:31:23 補充：
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