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There are many festivals in Hong Kong. Today I would like to talk about what festivals I like and I don't like.
I like Chinese New Year.Chinese New Year is always in February.I can get lucky money from my relatives. I can eat trunip cake which is my favorite food, I can also decorate my home with red paper. Therefore, I like Chinese New Year very much.
I don't like Ching Ming Festivel because I need to sweep the graves and burn joss sticks. I need to walk a long distance to my dead relatives graves.As a result, I don't like Ching Ming Festivel.

There are many festivals in Hong Kong. Today I wanted to talk about which festivals I like and don't like.
I like Chinese New Year. Chinese New Year is generally in February. I can get luck money from my relatives. I can eat turnip cake. It is my favorite food. I get to decorate my home (house or apartment) with red papers. I think it is beautiful.
I don't like the Ching Ming Festival because I need to sweep the graves and burn joss sticks. It is a long walk to my dead relatives' graves so I don't like the Ching Ming Festival.