英文高人請指點

1) I don't believe that the idea of shopping is the only meaning to life.
2) The prices have fellen dramatically and thus, many people went into bankruptcy
3) It is unnecessary to get distressed over small details.
4) To keep a group of wild school children under control takes a serious amount of effort.

1. I do not agree with the idea that shopping is the all-important element of life.
2. prices declined to level very lower than expected and as a result many were made bankrupt.
3. do not pay too much attention over spilt milk
4. maintaining a group of wild school children in order takes a great amount of effort.

2006-11-20 23:32:24 補充：
correction: 2. prices declined to a level very much lower than expected...

1. I really/seriously do not agree that the be-all and end-all of life is shopping.
2. Prices fell ridiculously anf many peoplewent broke.
3. There is nothing you can do when something has happened.
4. It is a serious amount os effort to keep the mischevous kids' discipline.