HELP!!!Please add commas for the following essay!!!Urgent!

aha! my turn again~!
well it's kinda easy...anway! I'll put those additional commas inside a bracket in order to make things easier for you.

Here you go:

When my brother and I were growing up(,) my mother used to summon us from playing by ringing a solid brass bell that could be heard for miles. All of the other kids(,) to our great embarrassment, knew when our mother was calling us(,) and they would tease us by making ringing noises. We begged her to yell like the other moms(,) but she knew she had a foolproof system and wouldn’t change. One day(,) while we were playing with our friends in the fields behind our houses(,) the bell rang in the middle of an important game. The other kids began their usual taunts that our mother was calling(,) but this time we bravely ignore the bell. When it rang the second time(,) we ignored it again. By the third ring, however(,) we knew that we were in big trouble(,) so we dashed for home. We agreed on the way that we would tell our mother that we just didn’t hear the bell. We arrived hot(,) sweaty(,) and panting from our run. Before Mom could say a word(,) my brother blurted out, “We didn’t hear the bell until the third ring!” Fortunately for us(,) our mother couldn’t stop laughing(,) and we escaped the punishment we deserved.

2006-11-17 13:31:12 補充：
**is anyway instead of anway, typo :P

When my brother and I were growing up, my mother used to summon us from playing by ringing a solid brass bell that could be heard for miles. All of the other kids, to our great embarrassment, knew when our mother was calling us and they would tease us by making ringing noises. We begged her to yell like the other moms, but she knew she had a foolproof system and wouldn’t change.

One day, while we were playing with our friends in the fields behind our houses, the bell rang in the middle of an important game. The other kids began their usual taunts that our mother was calling, but this time, we bravely ignore the bell. When it rang the second time, we ignored it again.

By the third ring, however, we knew that we were in big trouble, so we dashed for home. We agreed on the way that we would tell our mother that we just didn’t hear the bell. We arrived hot sweaty and panting from our run.

Before Mom could say a word, my brother blurted out, “We didn’t hear the bell until the third ring!” Fortunately for us, our mother couldn’t stop laughing and we escaped the punishment we deserved.

When my brother and I were growing up, my mother used to summon us from playing by ringing a solid brass bell that could be heard from miles. All of the other kids to our great embarresment, knew when our mother was calling us and they would tease us by making ringing noises. We begged her to yell like other moms, but she knew that she had a foolproof system and wouldn't change.

2006-11-17 17:51:17 補充：
One day, while we were playing with our friends in the fields behind our houses, the bell rang in the middle of an important game. The other kids began their usual taunts that our mother was calling but this time, we bravely ignore the bell. When it rang the second time, we ignored it again.

2006-11-17 17:52:51 補充：
By the third ring, however, we knew that we were in big trouble, so we dashed for home. We aggreed on the way that we would tell our mother that we just didn't hear the bell. We arrived hot sweaty and panting from our run.

2006-11-17 17:54:22 補充：
Before Mom could say a word, my brother blurted out," We didn't hear the bell until the third eing!" Fortunately for us, our mother couldn't stop laughing and we escaped the punishment we deserved.

When my brother and I were growing up, my mother used to summon us from playing, by ringing a solid brass bell that could be heard for miles. All of the other kids, to our great embarrassment, knew when our mother was calling us and they would tease us by making ringing noises. We begged her to yell like the other moms, but she knew she had a foolproof system and wouldn' t change.


One day, while we were playing with our friends in the fields behind our houses, the bell rang in the middle of an important game. The other kids began their usual taunts that our mother was calling, but this time we bravely ignore the bell. When it rang the second time , we ignored it again.
By the third ring, however we knew that we were in big trouble, so we dashed for home. We agreed on the way that we would tell our mother that we just didn' t hear the bell. We arrived hot sweaty and panting from our run.
Before Mom could say a word, my brother blurted out, “We didn’t hear the bell until the third ring!” Fortunately for us, our mother couldn’t stop laughing and we escaped the punishment we deserved.
(End)

When my brother and I were growing up, my mother used to summon us from playing by ringing a solid brass bell that could be heard for miles. All of the other kids to our great embarrassment, knew when our mother was calling us and they would tease us by making ringing noises. We begged her to yell like other moms but she knew she had a foolproof system which wouldn’t change
One day, while we were playing with our friends in the fields behind our houses, the bell rang in the middle of an important game. The other kids began their usual taunts that our mother was calling but this time we bravely ignore the bell. When it rang the second time we ignored it again.

By the third ring, however, we knew that we were in big trouble, so we dashed for home. We agreed on the way that we would tell our mother that we just didn’t hear the bell. We arrived hot sweaty and panting from our run.

Before Mom could say a word my brother blurted out, “We didn’t hear the bell until the third ring!” Fortunately for us our mother couldn’t stop laughing and we escaped the punishment we deserved.