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The evaluation of the Fairmont Green Partnership Program for industry environmental responsbility, is that their research design and data are collected through properties and survey research. OR

It is evaulated that the research design and data of the Fairmont Green Partnership Program for environmental responsbility in industries, are collected through properties and survey research.

The evaluation of the Fairmont Green Partnership Grogram for environmental responsibility for industry is research (based) and (the) data (is) collected by properties research and survey research.