可否幫我張這句英文通順一點?

The evaluation of the Fairmont Green Partnership Program regarding the environmental responsiblity of the (hospitality) industry is based on data collected from property researches and surveys.
That's the best I can do based on your wording. By the way, the Fairmont Green Partnership Program is quite well-known.

Frankly, I do not entirely understand what you are trying to say in your above sentence. I tried to paraphrase your sentence below, hopefully, I have not changed your initial meaning.

The evaluation of the Fairmont Green Partnership Program's environmental responsibility for the industry is based on a survey with data collected from various properties.