What is the problem in the following sentence?

1. At night, my family and I used to chat until we went to bed.

2. Mary is my grandmother and she is 70 years old.

3. I strongly agree that the future of Hong Kong is good.

4. I am looking for a girl who is honest and open-mind.

5. Despite the main was heavy, we went to see the firework show.

6. I believe that if the Government does so, the problem will be solved soon.

7. I hate a person who does not tell me the truth.

2006-11-16 12:55:10 補充：
5. Despite the rain was heavy, we went to watch the firework show

1. At the night, my family and I were used to chat until we went to bed.
(were 是動詞，used to chat 是形容詞片語）
2. Mary is my grandmother, she is 70 year old.
(year要無s)
3. I strongly agree that the future of Hong Kong is good.
4. I am looking for a girl who is honest and open-minded.
5. Despite the rain being heavy, we went to see the firework display.
(despite 後面是名詞，所以用the rain being heavy)
6. I believe that if the Government does so, the problem will be solved soon.
7. I hate a person who does not tell me the truth.

!. At night, my family and I used to chat together till we go to bed. (因是每晚都聊天, 所以應該用現在式, 除非你是指之前的某一晚才用過去式)

2. Mary is my grandmother who is 70 years old now.

3. I strongly agree with you that the future of HK is good. (你要指出你強烈同意誰)

4. I am looking for an honest and open-minded girl.

5. Despite of the heavy rain, we went out to see the firework display.

6. 你相信政府做什麼? 但不能這樣說 does so, 你突然這一句這樣而不知你的真正意思, 所以都不知怎更改.

7. I dislike those persons who tell lie. (憎恨只會使你不開心, 還有是每人都有心底秘密, 你不能因一個人不告訴你真相而憎恨一個人的, 所以我將你那句攺成你不喜歡那些講大話的人)

2006-11-16 14:22:39 補充：
第 7 條的句子你不能用 a person, 因不說出真相的不會是 a person, 應是所有那些(多於一個,所以不應用 a) 都不告訴你真相的人.

1. At the night, my family and I used to chat until we went to bed.
My family and I used to chat at night before going to bed.
2. Mary is my grandmother, she is 70 years old.
Mary is my grandmother, and she is 70 years old; Mary is my 70-year-old grandmother; Mary is my grandmother who is 70 years old.
3. I am strongly agree that the future of Hong Kong is good.
I strongly agree that the future of Hong Kong is good.
4. I am looking for a girl, who is honest and open-minded.
I am looking for an honest and open-minded girl.
5. Despite the main was heavy, we went to see the firework display.
Despite that the street was crowded, we went to see the firework display.
6. I believe that if the Government does so, the problem will be solve soon.
I believe if the Government does such, the problem will be solved soon.
7. I hate a person does not tell me the truth.
I hate a person who does not tell the truth.

1. At night, my family and I used to chat until we went to bed.
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2. 兩句野都係講mary, 所以兩句中間加個conjunction 'and' 啦

3. I am strongly agree with you/ your point (你係agree with一個人/ 一個意見) that the future of HK is good. (d人邁o個陣都係i'm strongly agree....只係快左d, 聽得唔清楚je)

4. 唔要個comma, open-minded係adj, 唔可以冇左個ed

5. We went to see the firework display despite the rain was heavy.
(Despite係唔會放o係一句開頭ga~)

6. passive voice, 所以要用solved

7. I hate a person a person who does not tell me the truth.

1. At night....
2. ????
3. I strongly agree...
4. ???
5. Despite the heavy rain....
6. ...the problem will be solved soon
7. I hate people who don't tell me the truth
Or
I hate a person, a person who does not tell me the truth.