唔識作英文作文可唔可以教一教我呀？？？

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1. My best friend is called Mary. She is ten years of age. She is living in *****in just near to our school. Mary has a good family. Her father is a manager. Her mother is a sho*****eeper selling flowers. She has a younger brother of 5 and a younger sister of 3.
She likes reading books, playing piano and cooking pancakes. She also makes sandwiches every day and give a set of sandwichs to me for meal. I am very thankful for her kindness so that I always being a pack of lemon tea for her.

Mary's school result is very good especially in English and Mathematics. She always get the first or second rankings in the school examinations. She is very eager to teach our classmater to do the homework.
2. My best friend is called Mandy.We are really 1) TRUE friend (真正朋友).She's very 2) INTELLIGENT (聰明) and 3) HARDWORKING (勤奮).She always gets good marks in her tests and she learns things quickly.She helps me with my homework,especially with Maths! She's also a 4) LOYAL friend (忠心朋友) who's always been 5) ON MY SIDE (與我同一陣線),even when my other friends leave me.When I'm in a 6) BAD MOOD (壞心情),she listens to me patiently,and when I'm in a 7) GOOD MOOD (好心情),we have fun together.I know I can 8) RELY ON (依靠)Mandy in good times and in bad times.