Self recommendation letter help!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

用戶33340

2006-11-14 1:38 am

咁多位professional, 我想寫封自x信搵工, 唔知以下夠唔夠斯文得體??如果唔得幫我改改, 其實有的字我都唔識寫: 或更好的:
- contact me anytime if there is vacant 我想寫,如貴公司有空缺請貴公司考慮下我!
- and I am looking for a job, in am 我想寫我搵更一份am既工
- in personally I love jewellary very much 我想寫本人真係好想係jewel行列發展

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Hi, My name is Michael, born in Hong Kong, and I am looking for a job, in AM position, in personally I love jewellary very much, and I hope I can have an opportunity to work in this line of business. attached with my resume for your information, please contact me anytime if there is vacant

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RyAN

2006-11-14 9:09 am

✔ 最佳答案

你呢封信叫做求職信~你打得太短喇,唔識用英文可以用中文架~
你要講多d你嘅野俾人聽,學歷,專長等,(唔係話cv有就得嘅~)咁人地先至想認識你,叫你去面試~
http://www.jobs.gov.hk/big5/ig/jh_bc/ig_jh_info_3.asp
勞工處份求職信都幫到手架~

I look forward to having an opportunity for an interview in which I can further present my suitability for this position.
呢d先係英文,照抄就得

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