儲分換野ge 英文係咩?

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Customers can receive membership for free upon purchasing over $500.
Various kind of monthly benefits will be offered.
Members can collect points upon any purchase, which can be used to redeem special gifts.

信用卡換 gift 一般會用 redeem or redemption 一字

Free membership of our rewards program will be given to the customers who make their purchase over $500. Various benefits will be offered monthly to these members. The members can collect points from each purchase and redeem the collected points for special gifts ie. merchandise, gift certificates, etc.

儲分換野ge 英文係咩?

REDEMPTION of ` BONUS POINT `

儲分換野 in English is :
to EARN `BONUS POINT` in order to REDEEM reward.
[ to earn `Bonus Points` = 儲分 . ]
[ to redeem = 換 ]

Here are some EXAMPLES for u to understand it more easily :
1/. You have to earn 3000 Bonus Points to redeem the toaster.
2/. The Bonus Points earned have no expiry date.
3/. You can redeem your favourite items at any time.

Some suggestion for your essay ( if u don`t mind ) :

Free memberships will be offered to customers having purchased over HK$500.
Each month, members can enjoy various benefits ( such as entertainment and discount offers, health products and travel benefits, etc. )
So start spending smart ! Simply earn enough Bonus Points to redeem your favourite items at any time.


You can make your essay more attractive, starting with :
We proudly present our ` Bonus Point Rewards 2006-07 `, bringing you lots of fascinating items........


Hope this can help.

儲分 = save points

P.S. If you don't mind, I'll make some corrections to your passage>

Give membership to customers who purchase more than $500
Different benefits will be given to them in each month.
Whenever they make a purchase, they can save points to exchange for special gifts.