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I myself think that, the main factor which causes a considerable quantity of young gangsters is the loose of their parents.
Most of the parents have not enough time to stay with their sons and daughters as they are having a job and they just sew it up with money.
That's why the children would ask their friend to accompany them. As time passes, they would hang with many friends and they might do some illegal crime since they want their life to be more excited and excited.
And I think the parents are the worst!

2006-11-09 23:37:06 補充：
since they want their life to be more exciting and exciting.

你那句在父母之後是那麼多逗號，是否要別人替你寫下去你的感想? 若是，那就不要將那些問題推到父母身上說最錯的都是他們的父母了，父母那麼辛苦在外工作賺錢回家，自己不好好讀書還怪責父母，那是什麼道理？他們不是不想管教孩子，只是要外出工作，也不知怎教孩子，其實那社會的問題，是社會的錯，希望你也明白，天下無不是的父母，只是為口奔馳，所謂讀書明理，我們應該要體諒別人，尊重對方，那就會和諧一點，不好意思，因不知你要寫多長的感受，而且我的感受應該也跟你的不一樣，祝你好運．