英文高手請!!!help me to write poem please~

For the beauties of the heavenly bodies which are shown in the sky.
I am stunned by its magnificence and design.
Reverence to its creator crawls into my heart everytime.
Everlasting mysteries are spoken without sound.
Wondrous sight are painted onto the sky by the omnipotent’s hands.
On my knees, I pray to Thee.
Remind me of how small I am and make me a man without pride.
Kindly guide me through all difficulties in my life.
Show me the way and let me hear your dearest sound.

2006-11-09 18:02:49 補充：
Show me the way and let me hear your dearest sound改為 Show me thy way and let me hear thy dearest sound會更好．

2006-11-10 20:01:44 補充：
因著天空美體的美麗它的偉大與設計使我吃驚每一次，對它的創造者的崇敬都進入我內心永恆的奧秘無聲地述說奇妙的景象被那全能者的手繪在天際我脆下向祢禱祈常提醒我是多麼渺少，並使我成為一個沒有驕傲的人慈悲地引導我經過種種人生的困難指示我你的道路，並使我得聞你親切的聲音

Fireworks,
climbing up the sky,
lighting and brighting up the night,
look at there, look at here,
thousands of fireworks over me,
up above, the colors born and arise,
and it feels like my world is like that sky,
with brilliants and joyfull fireworks everywhere I'm going by.