可唔可以幫我譯做英文呀?

I call xxx, this year 18 years old, are xxxxxxx middle school graduate, in front of me is xxxx is the salesclerk, again is afterwards xxxx is the shop service assistant, but is xxxx does the courtyard service for 10 months to the previous labor, is a lee primary interest is in the candy department, the ordering, sells wildly, clean, manufacture food, I have open the certificate am call xxxxxxxx, usually clock Italy accesses the net, reads, the good street, I thought my already advantage is has obeys the nature,

你自己改小小野啦，因為你唔係用書面詞打出嚟 ~

My name is XXX, 18 years old, and I graduated from XXX secondary school. I had worked as shop keeper and store assistant before. As to my last job, I have served as a salesman(因為不知院務員是甚麼，所以估是外務員） in the candies department for 10 months, the main duties was stock ordering, selling, cleaning and food producing. I got a certificate in XXXX. During my leisure time, I like internet surfing, reading and window shopping. I think the biggest advantage of me is my obedience.

I call xxx, this year 18 years old, are xxxxxxx middle school graduate, in front of me is xxxx is the salesclerk, again is afterwards xxxx is the shop service assistant, but is xxxx does the courtyard service for 10 months to the previous labor, here's primary interest is in the candy department, the ordering, sells wildly, clean, manufacture food, I have open the certificate am call xxxxxxxx, usually like to surf the internet, read, shopping, I thought my already advantage is has obeys the nature,

2006-11-08 07:53:39 補充：
I mean " my previous job is the salesclerk in xxx shop..."

My name is (your name). I am 18 years old. I am graduated from (school name). I have worked at (company name) as a sales clerk for (number) years, also at (company name) as a store assistant for (number) years. I also worked for (company name) as an inventory clerk in the Candies Department for 10 months. My main responsibilites of this job were placing orders as needed, selling candies, cleaning the store, making food. A certificate of (name of the certificate) was given by the Company. At my leisure time, I like to read, surf the internet and shop. I feel that my strength is obedience.

其實你係咪寫緊求職信呀?
因為你講的大部份和工作有關

但如果真的是求職信的話, 建議要再執執佢囉.
1. 你要講下你有d 咩係份工要的技能
2. 你講你的興趣對求職幫助不大, 要把握時間sell 你自己.
3. 唔好直譯啦, 人地一問你野你答唔到會好難睇.

My name is xxx, 18 years old. I graduated from xxxxxx Secondary School. I first started as a salesperson at xxxx and then as Store Assistant at xxxxx. I served 10 months in my last employment. I serviced at the candies department and my major responsibilities including stock ordering, sales, cleaning and food preparation. I have a certificate in xxxxxxxxx.

During my leisure time, I like to surf on the internet, reading and shopping. I think being obeident is my main advantage.

my name is.....,i am 18yaers old...i have completed my secondary life..

2006-11-07 23:35:47 補充：
middle scool...ha!

2006-11-07 23:38:58 補充：
before, i am a shopkeeper..again is afterwards ....... is the shop service assistant, but is ......... does the courtyard service for 10 months to the previous labor, is a lee primary interest is in the candy department,

2006-11-07 23:39:12 補充：
the ordering, sells wildly, clean, manufacture food, i have open the certificate am call .........., usually clock Italy accesses the net, readind, walk over streets, i thought my already advantage is has obeys the nature,...change capital letter by yourself...