is that grammar correct?

2006-11-08 5:51 am
There is some courses for staff, but they need themselves to pay the payment.
those certificates are identified as professional qualification.
They Distinguish High risk program from low risk program who refer to danger level of facility and equipment, participant’s age, participant’s Knowledge and technique to that activity and statistic.
If the high risk program hold before, the manager and leading staff hold a meeting for analysis risk of this activity.

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2006-11-08 6:06 am
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We can write this paragraph in a better way as follows:

The staff have to pay for the course fee in which certificates will be issued for staff to recognize their professional qualification.

The risk level for each program depends on the complexity of the facility and equipment, age and education level of participants, participants' background knowledge and statistic. A meeting will be held by the manager and leading staff for analysing the risk level of the activity.

Hope it can help you!
2006-11-08 2:43 pm
There are some certificate courses offering for the staffs but they have to pay by themselves. The certificates from these courses are qualified for professional.
They are separated into 2 programs: high risk program and low risk program for which the participants are grouped by their age, their knowledge, their technique and the dangerous level of facility and equipment.
If the high risk program has been held before, the managers and leading staffs would hold a meeting for the risk analysis of this activity.

I tried my best to translate into more understandable English. Hope this will help you.
2006-11-08 1:25 pm
there are some courses offered to staffs, but they need to pay for it themselves.
those certificates are considered as a professional qualification.
they distinguish high risk program from low risk program based on the dangerous level of the facility and equipment, participant's age, participant's knowledge and technique to the activity, and statistic.
if the high risk program is held, the manager and leading staff will hold a meeting for the analysis of the risks of the activity.
2006-11-08 7:10 am
There is some courses for staffs btu if the want to go on these courses, they will have to pay the fee themselves.
These certificates are identifies as qualification for professionals.
The distinguish high risk program start from low risk program which refer to the danger level of facility and equipment, participant's age, participant's knowlege and technique to that activity and a statistic will be made.
If the high risk program are told before, the manager and leading staffs will hold a meeting to analysis the risk of this activity.

Tried my best , hope it will help.

2006-11-07 23:11:09 補充:
There are some courses for staffs btu if the want to go on these courses, they will have to pay the fee themselves.
2006-11-08 6:01 am
as i cannot fully understand what you try to say, i can only correct those which i can recognise.

there are some courses for staff but they need to pay themselves. the certificates awarded are recognised as professional qualification.

the programs vary from Distinguish High risk program to Low risk program, basing on the danger level of facility and equipment, participant's age, participant's knowledge and technique to that activity and statistics(?).

before holding the high risk program, the manager and leading staff will hold a meeting to analyze the risk of this activity.
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