~ can't catch up with teacher's words
~ don't respect teachers
~ can't absorb the ideas in the lessons
~ this will double the time needed for revising at home
~ disturb other classmates
- you can define the word "concentrating" in your introduction
- then in the body, you can talk about the points of not being concentrating, the causes of not being concentrating, why? give evidence and examples
- in your last paragraph (concolusion), you can start with "Overall or lastly" and say like.
students should be concentrating in class, because they absorb more new knowledge, or maybe go like "why do people have to go to school". going to school help them to increase their knwoledge that they cant learn from anywhere. something like that
some points for you :
not being concentrating caused with different factors .
- the lessons are too boring
- the teacher is not good enoguh (make you feel bored)
- thinking of some other things (fun sum **)