捉錯處 1（不是功課，好野，高人請進）

藝術是全無障礙的溝通平台，藉著藝術創作，有不同能力或殘疾的人士均可發揮潛能，盡展所長。藝術亦是滌盪心靈的良方，透過參與藝術創作我們可以感受到別人的心境，互相欣賞及關心。

Art is a platform for barrier-free communication. Through the creation of art, people of different abilities and disabilities can all unleash their potential and develop their talents. Art is also a chicken soup for the soul, we can feel what others feel, and show our appreciation and concern for each other by taking part in the creation of art.

I have chosen to use present tense in this passage as it sounds like some facts to me.

ARTS opens doorways to barrier-free communication. Through artistic creation, all people, regardless of their different abilities and challenges, can unlesh their potential and develop their talents. Arts is also an excellent means to ENHANCE ONE'S MIND AND CULTIVATE ONE'S CHARACTER. Through participation in ARTS (no article because you are talking something in general), we can feel what other people feel; and CARE ABOUT AND APPRECIATE each other.