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1.Today, Mary and I go watching a Japanese cartoon, Ales From Earthsea, at Goldden Harvest cinema in Hollywood Shooping Centre.(因為用I took Mary是香港人的說法：我帶瑪莉去，正式應該用瑪莉和我去．．．除非瑪利是一個小孩，就要我們帶）

2. Jim said that people in Hong Kong were very nice. He said that though Hong Kong was much smaller than USA, it was safer.
(要記得在said that後面用過去時態，因為英文文法要求要前後句時態一致；所以，我們不可以說Jim said that Hong Kong people is...；並且Hong Kong people是港式英文，應該用People in Hong Kong或最近漸漸流行的Hong Konger)

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I took Mary to watch a Japanese cartoon called Tales From Earthsea at the Golden Harvest Cinema in Hollywood Shopping Centre today.

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I took Mary to watch a Japanese cartoon, Tales From Earthsea, at the Golden Harvest Cinema in Hollywood Shopping Centre today.

2. Jim said that Hong Kong people are very nice and although Hong Kong is smaller than USA, public order of Hong Kong is much better.

1. Today, Mary and I watched a Japanese cartoon, Ales From Earthsea, at Goldden Harvet (Golden Harvest?) in Hollywood Shopping Centre.
2. Jim said that Hong Kong people is very nice. He also said that In spite of the small size of Hong Kong when compared with the USA, it is more safe to live in Hong Kong than in the USA.

"Although" might not be very suitable here. and "USA" must follow "the"

1.Today, [Mary and I] watch a Japanes cartoon, Ales From Earthsea, at Goldden Harvet in Hollywood Shopping Centre.

2.Jim said that Hong Kong people [are] very nice and although Hong Kong [is smal], [the security is better than USA].

2006-11-02 16:25:10 補充：
1. 非常口語化，應用Mary and I.2.1. Hong Kong people 應用眾數.2.2 用了although之後5可以用but；正如用了but，5可以用although.sorry! smal=small

1. Today I took Mary to watch a Japanese carton, Tales from Earthsea, at Golden Harvest Cinema in the Hollywood Shopping Centre.

2. Jim said that Hong Kong people are very nice. He said that althougj Hong Kong is smaller than the USA, but the security is better in the USA.