Please help me to proof-read these sentence#2

In front of me, there are two large wood-made pin-boards hanging on the wall. I usually pin my schedules, notes and receipts onto one of the boards.
My family is very important to me because I think one cannot live well without one*s family.
The other board is filled with my friends* portraits which are snapshots by a Polaroid camera. ( To be more exact, *covered* is a more suitable word than *filled* in this sentence )
[The symbol ( * ) stands for an apostrophe]

In front of me, there are two large wooden(wood made) pin-boards hung(hanging) on the wall. I usually stick my schedules, notes, and receipts onto one of the boards(board).

My family is very important to me because I think one cannot live well without one’s(its) family.
(Error realted to the word 'its')

The other board is filled with my friends’ portraits which are snapshotted(snapshot) by a Polaroid camera. (Error realted to the phrase 'are snapshot by')

In front of me, there are two large wood-made pinboards on the wall. I usually pin my schedules, notes, and receipts onto one of the boards.

My family is very important to me because no one can live well without them.

The other board is filled with my friends' snapshot portraits made by Polaroid camera.
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notes: what are these:
(Error realted to the word 'its') --
(Error realted to the phrase 'are snapshot by')

In front of me, there are two large wood-made pin-boards hanging on the wall. I usually stick my schedules, notes, and receipts onto one of the boards.

My family is very important to me because I think one cannot live well without his/her family.

The other board is filled with my friends' portraits which are snapshots by a Polaroid camera.