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2006-10-31 1:37 am
1. When I am retirement, I will travell around the world.

2. My dream job is designer.

3. I want to keeep Hong Kong safety.

4. There have many beautiful paces in Japan.

5. I want to help people who have dangerous.

6. I want too be a fashion designer, I want to live in Japan.

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2006-10-31 1:47 am
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1when I am retirement .I will travel around the world.

2. My dream job is a designer.

3. I want to keep Hong Kong safety.

4. There have many beautiful places in Japan.

5. I want to help people who has dangerous.

6. I want to be a fashion designer, I want to live in Japan.
2006-10-31 2:48 am
1. when i am retired , i shall travel around the world

2. my dream job is to be a designer

3. i want to keep hong kong safety

4. there are many beautiful places in japan

5. i want to help people who are in danger

6. i want to be a fashion designer too , i want to live in japan
參考: memmmeeeeeee
2006-10-31 1:56 am
1. When I retire, I will travel around the world.

2. My dream is to be a designer.

3. I want to issure Hong Kong safety.

4. There are many beautiful places in Japan.

5. I want to help people who are in danger.

6. I want to live in Japan and be a fashion designer.
參考: myself
2006-10-31 1:53 am
1. When I am retired, I will travel around the world.

2. My dream job is to be a designer.

3. I want to keep the safety in Hong Kong.

4. There are many beautiful places in Japan.

5. I want to help people when they are in danger.

6. I want to be a fashion designer. I want to live in Japan.
2006-10-31 1:49 am
1. When I am retirement, I will travel around the world.
2. My dream job is to be a designer.
3. I want to keep Hong Kong safety.
4. There have many beautiful places in Japan.
5. I want to help people who is dangerous.
6. I want to be a fashion designer and live in Japan.


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