yesterday,a senior policeman was walking along a path when he suddenly heard the sound of a woman crying.He ran quickly and finally caught the robber.
以上是從書copy 下來的。那我可以改成這樣嗎?
yesterday,when a senior policeman was walking along a path,he suddenly heard the sound of a woman crying.He ran quickly and finally caught the robber.
將個when 調左上前面,我會比較覺得流暢,但意思好像有點不同。
另外仲有一個問題,a senior policeman 佢第一次出現用 a 係正常的。但robber 也是第一次出現,唔用the 用 a 會唔文法上有問題呢?
英文文法問題
2006-10-29 1:49 am
回答 (4)
2006-10-29 2:16 am
✔ 最佳答案
當然是原文較好。你改寫的，意思上跟上面無分別，但文法有錯，可改為：
Yesterday, a senior policeman was walking along a path. Suddenly, he heard the sound of a woman crying. He ran quickly and caught the robber at last.
我不用 finally caught, 好 chinglish， 我就算用都放在 後面 caught the robber finally。
用 a 或 the robber 不是大問題，因那個 ROBBER 是預左。
2006-10-29 3:09 am
yesterday,a senior policeman was walking along a path when he suddenly heard the sound of a woman crying.He ran quickly and finally caught the robber.
書通常係張個when扮係中間既
but其實應該張個when扮係前面好D
robber用the/a都冇問題既
書通常係張個when扮係中間既
but其實應該張個when扮係前面好D
robber用the/a都冇問題既
2006-10-29 1:55 am
我覺得When在前面流暢些, 文法較正確...
應該是 A robber... The 是錯的...
應該是 A robber... The 是錯的...
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