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Whether Hong Kong should put more resources to promote itself as an eco-tourism destination, different voices and opinions arise. Some claim that promoting eco-tourism is not the priority in boosting our declining tourism, while advocators insist that the sucess of advertising eco-tourism might be able to attract huge numbers of potential tourists. In my opinion, I agree that Hong Kong should promote eco-tourism as a long-term strategy.

advocator 提倡者;擁護者
boost 推動;幫助;促進

2006-10-23 00:52:14 補充：
arise 出現,形成long-term 長期的strategy 策略, 對策

Different people will have their own opionions about whether Hong Kong should be promoted as an eco-tourist destination, some say it is not the first priority of tourists, but some see there will be a great potential. However, I think Hong Kong government should promote it and it is worth trying.

Whether Hong Kong SAR Government should promote Hong Kong as An Eco-tourist destination or not? Of course, different people hold different viewpoints. Some of them argue that there are not so many tourists interested in Eco-tourist, Some of them pinpoint that there are lots of room to develop it.........

At last, not at least , I pro Hong Kong SAR Government should promote Hong Kong as Eco-tourist destination.