gramma is ok?

2006-10-20 7:48 am
1. While I am being selective, I am also looking for the right company to join at the same time.

2. (Which/what???) type (of???) computer software(s???) can you use?

3. What do you do in your leisure time before you getting a job?

anyone can check for me? thanks

回答 (5)

2006-10-20 8:01 am
✔ 最佳答案
1. Selective means choose carefully. So the sentence should be changed to: As I am a selective person, I am still looking for the right company to work for.
2. what types of computer softwares can you use?
3. What do you do at your leisure before getting a job?
2006-10-20 9:34 pm
1. While I am being selective, I am also looking for the right company to join at the same time.

selective is not a proper word. Try “screened”.篩選
article for the right company should be “a”

2. (Which/what???) type (of???) computer software(s???) can you use?

All choices could be possible and correct.

3. What do you do in your leisure time before you getting a job?
correct
2006-10-20 11:29 am
The 1st sentence

I think you want to say as you are a selective person, you are careful of choosing which company to join. However, the way that you put it couldn't really tell this meaning. So your sentence should be.

As I am a selective person, I will look for a right company to join. (you use a right company, not the right company because you do not know which company you are going to join)

2nd
what type of computer software can you use?

3rd
What do you do at your leisure before you have a job? (leisure means time free from demand, so there is no need to add the word time after the word leisure)
參考: myself
2006-10-20 8:01 am
1. While I am being selective, I am also looking for the right company to join at the same time.
1. While I WAS being selectiveD, IN THE MEAN TIME, I WAS SEEKing A right company to join.

DO NOT REALLY UNDERSTAND WHAT YOU TRY TO SAY????????

2. (Which/what???) type (of???) computer software(s???) can you use?
2. WHICH COMPUTER PROGAMMES THAT YOU CAN USE?

3. What do you do in your leisure time before you getting a job?
3. WHAT DID YOU DO BEFORE YOU HAVE GOT THIS JOB? OR
WHAT WOULD YOU DO IN YOUR LEISURE TIME BEFORE YOU GETTING TO WORK?

ONCE AGAIN, DO NOT REALLY UNDERSTAND WHAT YOU TRY TO SAY????????
2006-10-20 7:57 am
1. right
2. what type of computer software can you use?
3. what do you do in your leisure time you get a job?

also, is can anyone check for me.
not anyone can check for me

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is my grammar ok.
NOT grammar is ok

2006-10-20 00:12:36 補充:
3. what do you do in your leisure time before you get a job?
參考: i am sitting with my english friend


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