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I am xxx.
I am glad to see you all.
I live in Sai Wan Ho
I have a father, a sister, and a Grandma.
I am a simple person.
But I am a shy person.
I seldom talk to others voluntarily.
I like swimming, going shopping, and watching movies.
I hope to learn from you all

my name is XXX
nice to meet you all.
I live in Sai Wan Ho and I have a father, sister, grandmother.
I am a simple person.
I am shy....so i never talk to others actively..
I like swimming, going shopping, and watching movies.
thank you,bye~~

My name is xxx
I am really happy that i can make friends with you.
I am live in Sai Wan Ho with my father and elder sister ,and also with my grandma.
I have a simple heart but I am a shy person that I will not talk to strangers actively / (have active talks with strangers ).
My hobbies are swimming,go shopping and watching films.
I hope you will offer an opinion for me to improve ! Thank you.

my name is XXX. i am very glad to meet everyone of you. i live in sai wan ho. i have father, sister and grandma. i am a very simple person but i am also quite shy, so i never play an active role to approach people. i love swimming, window shopping (or shopping) and watching movies during my leisure time. i hope we can be friends and get along well. thank you.

Hello , my name is XXX
I am glad to meet you all
i live in ..............
i have a father , sister and grandmother
i am a simply person , but on the other hand , i am too shy
i dont know how to talk to people initatively
I like swimming , shopping and watching movie on my spear time
I hope i can learn somethings from you all in the future

This is XXXX.
It's nice to meet you.
I live in Sai Wan Ho.
I have a father, sister, and grandmother.
I'm a simple person, but I feel shy sometimes.
I'm active to talk to the others.
I like swimming, shopping and going to cinema.
Hope to be friends with you!