請問有沒有人可以幫我翻譯?

Thanks for the mail and your bank information that you give me for the transfer. So I will make the transfer to your bank account number as this will be more secure and faster in case of the transfer of the funds. I have accept to make the payment of $5750 in your favour, so kindly get me posted immediately you confirm the payment confirmation from my bank that said the money as been deposit with them. I will let you know once I have make the tranfer.
謝謝你的郵件和銀行資料, 我會把款項轉帳到你銀行戶口。對於調動金錢來說, 這樣做比較安全快捷。向你支付$5750，我是接受的, 一旦你銀行確認收到款項, 請立刻通知我。我辦妥轉帳手續後, 會即時告知你。
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你的英文原文, 有幾處文法錯了, 另外一些用詞不甚正確, 稍作修改會更好：
Thanks for your mail and your bank information, I will make the transfer to your bank account. In the case of transfer of funds, this is not only more secure, it is also faster. I have accepted to make the payment of $5750 in your favour, so kindly keep me posted immediately when you receive confirmation from your bank that the money has been deposited with them. I will let you know once I have made the transfer.
( bank account 可以了, 不需要 ‘bank account number’；I have accepted 不是 ‘accept’；keep me posted 不是 ‘get me posted’；has been deposited with them 不是‘as been deposit’；have made the transfer )...................( keep me posted 意思是隨時為我提供某事的最新消息, 但文章所指的消息其實是銀行確認收到款項, 這樣的消息通知我一次便足夠, 不必不斷更新資料, 因此實在無須用 keep me posted 一詞 。而且, 說 keep me posted 又說 immediately 等於說又隨時又立刻, 意思有些累贅, 應只說 keep me posted, 或改說 inform me immediately)

謝謝你的來信及你所提供的銀行資料作轉帳之用,那麼我會把錢轉到你的戶口去, 這樣比較安全和快捷。我已同意負出$5750以答謝你的幫忙, 如你確認從我的銀行戶口收到款項後,請馬上通知我。我一轉帳完畢也會馬上吿訴你。

謝謝你的信件和你的銀行資料。我將會把錢匯入你的戶口因我覺得這樣比較安全快捷。我接受你希望的金額5750，當你收到錢後請立即結我知道。我會通知你當我過了數。



大概意思係咁，不過我D中文唔係幾好。=)