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The Below essay is just my try , and I would say at first, I am not a professor or D.R I would like to help :_p
In the 22nd Century,
Schools only emphazise on students global knowledge,
They don't quite care about the feelings.
Why is it there are good and bad people in this world?
WHy?
Because the problem comes from EDUCATION.
ONce one gets wrong message from teacher they will think beyond and may be wrongly that will make them fall in to the dark path.
Schools should understand why.
Not quite many students can answer why is education important.
Try to ask your classmates why do you come to school?
Why do you study?
1.We need to communicate in this society, in this big group of people.
2.We have to know The rights, wrongs.
3.For Living in this society and job requirements, needed knowledge,
E,g if don't know eletric can pass throuugh water ,, waht will happen?
If you don't know language how do you communicate?
If you don't learn maths, how do you do the logically thinking?
Like How to open the door, how to press the lift well these seems to be too easy and common, so compare if you stay in an island your self learning nothing just sitting their so..
One thing is "Creativity is important than knowledge" which is quoted from Mr. Albert Einstein‎

ok till here I hope it gave you some ideas,