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Enters passes by for 95 years to graduate after the American design institute returns the port, has patted a credit card advertisement with MTV. After the friend introduced had known the clock treasure, and signing a treaty is a manager, latter penetrates the manager to introduce the record company tries the sound, official signing a treaty becomes "the due east record company" under the flag the singer. In August films the movie < immortal happy to be floating >, and promotes the first movie original sound big small dish. In September with Chen Hsiaotung, Chen Chien Ying, Qiu Yinghsin promotes the mixed brocade small dish < to open sky >, officially joins the musical world

Enter the conduct to pass
Designed and returned to Hong Kong after graduation from institute in U.S.A. in 1995, made Ji's advertisement of a credit and MTV. The friend has recommended knowing Zhong to value highly , contracts as the manager , and then introduce to the audition of record company through the manager, sign up to become the singer under command of ' the record company of the due east ' formally . Shoot in August ,Introduce the primary sound video disc of first film. With Chen Xiaodong, JianYing , tip Qiu Chen happy to put out various discs ,Put into the music circles formally

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Work Experience
Graduated from an American Design College in 1995, I returned to Hong Kong and starred in a credit card advertisement as well as MTV production. Through a friend's introduction, I got to know Ms (Chong Zhan). She became my talent manager. Later on, she introduced me to an audition at a record company, and officially signed up as a singer under (Universal Music Hong Kong).

In August, I participated in the film , and launched the first original movie soundtrack CD. In September, I launched a compilation CD with (Daniel Chan, Ray Chan and Yau Wing Yan). That is when I officially enter the music industry.

Entered the duty to pass through in 1995 to graduate after the American design institute returns the port, has patted a credit card advertisement and MTV. After the friend introduced had known the clock treasure, and signing a treaty is a manager, penetrates the manager to introduce afterwards the record company tries the sound, official signing a treaty becomes "the due east record company" under the flag the singer. In August films the movie "the immortal happy to be floating", and promotes the first movie original sound big small dish. In September with Chen Hsiaotung, Chen Chien Ying, Qiu Yinghsin promotes the mixed brocade small dish "to open the sky" officially to join the musical world.

2006-10-14 13:33:37 補充：
第三行第六個字clock treasure 轉 Chung Tsang更正版

2006-10-14 13:34:26 補充：
刪除"the"